Tuesday, March 18, 2014

Prototype

It is pretty common knowledge that high school freshmen will encounter their first Shakespeare play, Romeo and Juliet being the most predominate choice of English teachers. It is also equally known that high school students dread the words Shakespeare and play. Who could blame them? They have probably been exposed to the idea that Shakespeare was difficult to understand and boring. That would not get me excited to read a text either if the only words I associated with it were difficult and boring. What can be done to get these students more excited and prepared for an appreciation of Shakespeare? How about staring them younger?

With our edition of Shakespeare’s As You Like It we aim to draw students in to Shakespeare’s world at an early stage in life: middle school. Through simplified text and accessible supplementary material, our edition will show students that Shakespeare’s plays can be understood and interesting. And beyond mere entertainment this edition will allow students to develop and use critical thinking skills, a skill that teachers and administrators would be ecstatic about.

With close to hundreds of editions available to choose from, there are little, if any, selections that would be appropriate for a middle school audience. Most editions are situated for a college undergraduate audience such as The New Cambridge Shakespeare edited by Michael Hatttaway, which has decent front
matter that covers topics such as gender, politics, and stage history in an attempt to situate the play in a historical context. There is also the daunting edition of from The Arden Shakespeare collection edited by Juliet Dusinberre, with such dense material that even undergraduates are left feeling overwhelmed. The Folger Library Shakespeare edited by Louis B. Wright and Virginia A. Lamar comes closer to a
younger audience: unfamiliar words footnoted with simple explanations, several illustrations, and brief font matter that talks about Shakespearean theater, woodland magic, the author, and stage history. This edition would be more appropriate for a high school audience rather than for a middle school classroom. Then there is the Magna Shakespeare edition of As You Like It, with very simplified text and wonderful Japan style illustrations would be very accessible to a younger crowd although not necessarily intellectually stimulating enough for a classroom setting.

 Our edition of As You Like It will offer appropriate text and material for a middle school audience. This edition will offer teachers a medium that will help middle school students understand, appreciate, and even enjoy reading Shakespeare.

  • articles: Middle Ground: To like or Not to Like
    • article about appropriate teaching of S. and students response
      • “When I asked my 7th-graders if they thought studying Shakespeare was going to be boring, every hand in the class went up” (DeFord 85).
      • “No wonder, on the end-of-year evaluations, students rank Shakespeare as one of their favorite subjects” (DeFord 86).
  • What our edition will do:
    • simplified text while maintaining the integrity of Shakespeare’s language 
    • footnotes for unfamiliar words
    • vocab words for students
    • supplementary material which is written in a way that is easily accessible to students:
      • preface  
      • stuff between acts  
      • links to more if interested in more
    • end of act critical thinking questions 
    • common core standards:
      • 4.a use context as a clue for word meaning
      • 4.c. use specialized reference materials to find pronunciation or precise meaning
      • 5.a interpret figures of speech 
      • 5.b use relationship of words to better understand each word
      • 6 acquire and use accurately grade-appropriate general academic and domain specific words and phrases; gather vocab knowledge... 
    • teachers edition with more info, maybe ideas to teach(?)  

4 comments:

  1. Great job on your prototype! Seriously so impressed by your creativity -- definitely am seeing a few things I want to include in our edition.

    Essay: I think it sells pretty darn well as far as the aims of the edition are discussed. You guys are including some really helpful supplementary material. I have two suggestions. The first is to rid the essay of any sweeping statements (e.g. "it's pretty common knowledge," "it is known that high school students dread") for professionalism's sake as well as effectiveness's -- readers can be easily turned off by assuming statements. The second is to compare your edition to only editions suitable for a younger audience. I know because of scarcity that it might not be possible to compare yours to others directed to middle school students, but at the least I would say keep the compared editions as young as possible. Comparing yours to, say, an undergraduate level edition doesn't aid your group's argument because nobody would use such an advanced edition with such a young audience anyways.

    I honestly wish I had more feedback than that. I'm so impressed by yours and actually suggested a bunch of changes to ours based on it. But I do think the essay could be slightly more professional, less first-person-y, and more focused on comparing your edition to others directed to a more similar audience. Awesome job, you guys.

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  3. Hey just wanted to give some peer review feedback to your introduction and edition:
    First Impressions: I was super impressed by your strategy and idea for carving out a specific, niche market (middle schoolers) for your edition of AYLI! I haven't ever heard of a Shakespearean text targeting middle school students specifically, you guys do a great job of selling the reader on the idea! I did notice a few minor typos, but a quick read through of the introduction and content in your edition could easily fix that.
    Pitch: As I previously stated, I am so so impressed with your group's idea, and think that it is presented very well in your "pitch essay." Honestly, great job. My only suggestion would be to go a little more in depth on the kind of secondary materials included and how they will be specifically targeted to your audience in order to really sell your edition. The introductory essay does a great job of detailing the nature of annotations that will be included, if your description of supplementary readings was equally as detailed and informative of how they specifically apply to middle school students that would be great.
    Introductory Materials/Table of Contents: Because your edition is tailored for middle school students who have had little to none prior exposure to Shakespeare, I love the introductory bio on him. I found that section to be great, especially considering your audience. I also thought your table of contents was very well put together, and very detailed as to what the edition contains and the aims of each section. I did find your description on Gender Roles to be a bit confusing. If your group plans on glossing over/side stepping gender roles in the play, then maybe it would be better to delete the section altogether? Or if the section is kept then to delicately address the issue? I do believe that if handled correctly and tactfully, the role of gender can be adequately addressed, even considering the age of your target audience. Other than that, I thought the intro section was great, and I really liked the plan to have supplementary materials specific to each act between acts of the play.
    Text: I thought the included annotations and definitions were great, and very helpful considering your target audience. I also really liked your secondary reading at the end, and thought it was very clear and concise. Placing gender roles in the context of disguise and differing social norms for men and women worked very well for the act your group covered, but that approach may become strained considering the increasingly complicated depiction of gender as the play goes on.
    All in all, I thought your edition was great! You guys are off to a great start, and I gained a lot of insight for our own edition in reading your take on AYLI. Keep it up.

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  4. This prototype is great! The thing that caught my eye right off the bat was your use of supplementary material in between acts. This is a great way to break up the text so that it is more manageable for the students. If my middle school self saw that the text was broken up with interesting tidbits, I would definitely be less hesitant to delve in. Shakespeare can be intimidating for any age group and this is a great way to counter that sentiment.

    I agree with Juliet when she advises you to contrast your edition only with other editions that are aimed at your target audience. Middle school students are not likely to get anything out of comparisons involving editions that they are unfamiliar with in the first place.

    Overall, I really enjoyed this edition! It's very out-of-the-box which works very well, especially since you're targeting an audience that will appreciate creativity and new approaches to old material. Good job!

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